My What If Poem

My What If Poem

A Poem by Mariah

What if I lost you?

I might lose my mind

What if I found you?

I could fly without wings

What if we lost everything?

I would still have you

What if nothing, nothing, had happened at all?

© 2010 Mariah


Author's Note

Mariah
I'm doing an overload of poems since I didn't really write any over the summer, fall and winter. I've been busy writing my book...any way...Don't care if you hate it. It's mine...so yeah...*Smiles evily* nah jk hope you liked it when you read it...if not...see previous statement.

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I loveeeee It!!! its simple write to the point and easily understandable...
On "I could fly withour wings": What is dat word withour suppose to be??

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting poem. I see that is starts out with a fair amount of emotion. You can see that the speaker has much emotion about the one he or she is speaking. I like the abiguous ending.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2009
Last Updated on July 4, 2010

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Mariah
Mariah

Rome, NY



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i love to write and read. i'm a romantic and really like writing about lost romance and found romance. more..