Never ending battle

Constant struggle

Constant shedding of tears

Constant thoughts of death

 

A suicide survior

That's good right?

Another soul not lost in an evil battle!

 

Yeah right,

What they didn't tell you

Was the after math

 

They make it seem

Like it's a good thing

You survive your attempt

 

But the reality is

The thoughts become worse

The attempt becomes more violent

 

I would know

I tried several times

None of them worked

 

So how do I feel now

I still want to die

Since no one told me

 

This was a never ending battle

Reviews

[Michael X]

Very nice presentation of emotion found within the first 6 words, and opens the door to a state of
heartache and struggle, followed by an incredible statement to ponder.. to contemplate constant

thoughts of existance fading into nothing, I really enjoy dark poetry, there is an incredible ammount
of depth entwining the tragic yet well crafted meaning to awsome detail creating the image of battle,

the battle between heaven and hell, and everything caught in the middle. after rereading, I found
myself gripped even more the the raw subtle power, and the reality of the statement, excellent.
Take Care, Mike