It isn't fair

contest entry for inspired by a lyric

It's isn't fair

That you notice everyone

But me

 

It isn't fair

That I try to see you

Yet you just don't care

 

It isn't fair

That after all these years

Of you not being in my life

 

That after all these years

Having mom's hate

Rub off on me

 

Do you not see?

How it effect's me?

Once a daddy's little girl

 

It isn't fair

That even though I hate you

I still wish to see you

Reviews

[Too Me]

You express your emotions well. The last stanza is powerful! Nice work *Lana*

[DarkAngelWriter]

I love it. All the mixed emotions, the hurt feelings, and the song, come screaming out through this piece. Great entry.