Just breathe

1....2...breathe

Not hard right?

Just Breathe

 

How hard can it be

To just breathe

Just breathe

 

1....2...take a breath

No need to go crazy,

Bring your eyes up from the floor

 

You wonder why

You can't rest easy

Because you just need to take a breath

 

Now I see

It isn't taking a moment to breath

That is your problem

 

Your going through withdrawl

Wanting more of something

Now I see.....

 

1....2....Breathe

Now I see you can't

Your trapped by your own addiction

 

You rather trade in taking a breath

For your addiction....

Your addiction to money...

 

You can't have it all

Let it go

1...2.....Just breathe

Reviews

[Maximus. R.]

One and then the two
Two and then the three
Three and then the four
Then you gotta breathe
One and then the two
Two and then the three
Three and then the four
Then you gotta breathe
Then you gotta..
Then you gotta..

BREATHE!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This poem hit home for me. My oxygen satuation dropped from 96 to 70 at the end of June. What I remember most about my time in CCU was the nurse saying 1 ... 2 Just Breathe ... Take a Breath ... Just Breathe. I'm now on oxygen 24/7. I no longer have to remind myself to breathe. Your poem has meaning. We all take the simple act of breathing for granted. I know I did, but not anymore.

Good poem.

1....2...breathe

Not hard right?

Just Breathe



How hard can it be

To just breathe

Just breathe



Sometimes it is very hard to just Breathe.

You captured what I felt as I struggled to take a single breath.

[~Angelic~]

Thank you everyone for your comments.

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem ^^

[Darkness]

I really liked this. It actually had me taking a breath when it told me to. I especially liked the "1....2....Breathe" moments, not sure why, but the overall poem was very nice. Very well done.

[Ocean Orchid]

Let this ill competition for money break apart .... Just Breathe ... like the idea

specially --

You rather trade in taking a breath
For your addiction....
Your addiction to money...

[DarkAngelWriter]

"I've got your picture,
I'm coming with you,
Dear Maria,
Count me in!"
:)

Love it!

[Miss Reckoning]

Nice hun.
This piece calmed me down =]
I look forward to reading more of your works.