Mountain Top

The liquid trickles on down

Finding refuge upon my scalp

Slowly finding it's way, down my neck

Blood thirsty tears of savages 

Staining my skin, a rustic paint

Rolling down my vertical spine

Reminding who I am

Perpendicular I stand

A mountain has sprouted 

Right from the ground, Mother earth

Towering above the clouds

Connecting earth to the above 

A bridge between gaps

Dreams to reality 

Demons do try, act as a foe

To knock me down with a hard blow

Yet the angels above all know

The brains a vessel , Will at Mind

Constructs a veil glossy and finished

Steers the mind combined with the body

Climbing the mountain all the way

Whispers from angels, telling me to stay

Approaching the top one will see

A large golden gate, open and welcome 

Etched in perfect lettering

Carved by the one himself 

Baring the most sought out word

Desired by all, reached by so few

   Heaven

Reviews

[Virginia]

Very well crafted! Good work!!

[sonnie ibadah]

I like the flow, beautifully written.

[Carolynn]

I read this as the mountain being belief in Jesus, as there is no entry to this wonderful place called heaven except through belief in Him :) this is beautifully written!

[DoormanDan]

This poem was extremely beautiful! Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with the world!

[Laura Lynn]

I certainly hope there is a heaven, I certainly hope and to believe

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully crafted piece Angelo, really enjoyed :) x

[Stefanie Holmes]

This was so beautiful Angelo. Your descriptions are so vivid... I loved it!

100/100 from me.

~Stefanie

[Vandana Sharma]

The ultimate abode we all cherish:)