Slippery Ice

Slippery Ice

A Poem by AngeloRosell

Slipping and sliding 

Marble floor Ice

A giant round lake

With a quiet pale dot

Stuck in the middle

With wet rubber soles

White winters so cold

The sun sways closer

Flowers bloom green

Thinner than lace

The ice melts away 

© 2014 AngeloRosell


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I'm a lake walker so I'm really liking this poem. Well done Angelo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one, I take the ice melting away metaphorically, nicely done. Thank you for sharing this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 15, 2014
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Poetry is expression. You create guidelines for human thought with every line you put down, anyone who reads it will interpret something totally different and that's why I enjoy writing. more..