You Should not worry

short poem..love poem

You should not worry.. it's all I want for you .
You should not worry.. it's all I'm wishing for me..

I hold you in my heart so tightly..it's not likely that you could slip away.. with the first ill wind..
You should rest your heart .. but don't let me find it sleeping..
with one eye on the dream and one on what you're  keeping.

You should hold the thought the world is full of illusion..
and love the wildness and the confusion.

I hold you in my heart so tightly it's not likely.. that you could slip away with the first ill wind..

You should not worry.. it's all I want for you ..it's all I'm wishing for me.
Naomi Montana.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

So nice my friend ,dreamy quiet easy flowing thoughts..
Dont worry thats all I want from you,never worry thats what I wish for me
In my heart I hold you tight,will never let you slip away,rest your heart while you are in my arms
Think of the world as full f illusion and just love the wilderness and the confusion
Will never let you slip away ,will never let you worry,its all I wished for
hat was a lovely write ,so sweet and dreamy..

[deeps]

I can feel youe emotion coem through in this write.
Well written I like this.

[V. Lucien Maier]

the vocabulary and word structure are very good. the Flow of the piece is a bit rocky.
When I write a poem I find it helps to record it in audio so you can hear where the sticky points are. and reword them