Tear...

 

 

Tear

Which is tear?

Bitter

Salty

or lonely?

I am cuddling in the rain of tears...

Which is a road to travelling

straight

twisted

or tears wet her?

Which are a days?

colourful

or perhaps grey?

Whitch is a love?

simple

lifelong

or maybe sie isn't...

Reviews

[MarkGMelvin]

The rain of tears very sad yet an interesting read.
well written

peace
wmmelvin

[Q'ANIL]

...what can i say about this write??? "I am cuddling in the rain of tears"...so breathtaking and powerful...i think just "rain of tears" what got me the most...i am a huge fan of the usage of powerful words and lines...does that make me a fan of yours??? hmmmm...i take my hat off to you, dear poet...

~CJM

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A simple poem but yet heart warming and sincere with a good use of english this poem has tremendous potential,feel free to drop me a line anytime.

[vandana]

nice poem.