what if...

 

Under closed eyelids
concealed behind the curtain of dreams
you are immersing yourself into the next dream
where is happening whatever you want
... and if tomorrow will come
and you will open your eyes
what the life can surprise to you
how you will fill empty spaces
how you will revive the dead look
... and if tomorrow will come
 
          whether then you will wont to see
          All your soul

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

This is a fantastic write. What is dream and what is reality and is there a difference? Do we want to look deeply into ourselves? Your poem really makes me ponder that.
Good job.

[Doctor JKC]

Curiosity keeps me going.

We seem to be unable to truly understand ourselves
And do we want to?

Lovely poem made great by the illustration.
Dr. Callaghan

[Ellen Hammond]

I like the deep thoughts in this piece. The picture goes well with it as the pouring rain tends to make me melancholy as I contemplate and reflect on my life.

[Ricohard]

The soul needs contemplation

[MarkGMelvin]

Nice and the pic is awesome
great work

peace
wmmelvin

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Very poetic and moving piece liked the syncrynicty of the flowing rain and smooth lines which flowed nicely