Master of the Mask

Master of the Mask

A Poem by Meri Kindred
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He fights a losing battle He's losing the war

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The master of the mask
He hides behind
Those pretty blue eyes
That flawless disguise
Never unleashes the storm inside
He fights a losing battle
He's losing the war
He tries to forget the girl he adored
But no one sees that he has broken down
And the master of the mask is no more

© 2010 Meri Kindred


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Ohh very cool. I like the story in it, how he tries to hide behind a mask but find out it just isn't enough; he can't hide from himself. It had good rythm and was entertaining. Good job!

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This is a really good poem. Great rhythm and word choice helps it flow very nicely. Great job! Keep it up!

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 Added on February 25, 2010
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I love writing and drawing, and since I am on deviantart for my artwork mostly, I thought I would join somewhere where they focus on literature. more..