Invisible

sigh i don't think this makes sense

Seemingly gentle
as they say
The nicest ghost
ever known
Craving a second chance
every moment
To show
uncertainty
Quiet with people
i don't know
Eccentric with people
who is known so dearly
Crawling slowing
out of the shell of loneliness
The story goes on
til everyone is shocked
Has no ending
since this makes no sense

Reviews

[emma]

you enjoy writing invisibly, don't you? its clever.

[Wolfwind]

I think it makes perfect sense! The ink is before it's gotten bold enough to come out of it's invisibility and into the light of day. Kinda like someone who's really shy.

Great way to post that ink!

Aaron

[Dove]

It has no poem so I cant really say that much. I love the out of the box thinking, literally invisible.

[Sweet Silver Lining]

hey i found it, very nice way of writing this piece! i should try to write like this onetime ^U^

[Haunzwürthe]

"Has no ending since this makes no sense"

Genius concept. The title not only puts emphasis on the look of the poem, but the actual content as well. And for those who can't figure it out, it's their loss.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i don't see a poem so yeah...not sure if it makes sense

[paradise]

uhmm i dont think it does either i dont see a poem ??? :s