Split Second

do the lalalalalalalalala.....la

Smiling like nothing's wrong
Laughing like I'm having fun
Pretending like I belong
Wishing this day had not begun

Author's Note

i don't really know why i rhymed in this one coz i just write stuff down and i made this short coz i was just playing with it

Reviews

[Shafaz]

I like this one as well, I just can't help but feel that perhaps it would flow better if per say you were to take out the "-ing" from the word in the beginning of each line. Nonetheless, it was still quite good!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

it was an amazing poem because so many think this in their head.. it sucks to have problems and no one that understands to help and you have to act like it never existed.. really enjoyed reading.. great write