Kill Her Now

based on a quote i wrote...hehehe

Pick up the gun
Aim for the leg
Make her bleed
Make her Suffer

Grasp the Knife
Slit her throat
Agonizingly Slow
Knowing no mercy

Tie the rope
Drop her Fast
Break her neck
Watch the hanging body float

Push her off
Watch her fall
Watch her crash
See her lifeless body lie

Take the axe
One swift move
Watch her head roll
Stare at the horror on her face


Imagining this was real,

I smile in delight

Author's Note

just different ways of killing someone X3 felt a little psychotic today

Reviews

[Kayla Etreni]

i feel like this sometimes, love it!:)

[paparapapa]

Creepy. Haha. But interesting. Great write. :)

[Jenni-Chan]

oh. i know how that feels. also i have some really insane moments at times.

[stars are far]

This was so nice...i loved the steps of killing :P

[Sarah]

Really good, very strange though...
Nice work.
XD

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wow. This was awesome and gorey. Can't be afraid to let the pschyosis in us show. Nicely done!

[BloodyMary]

Well, you can NEVER be too gory. I loved it!

[Inyourshadow]

I feel we all have done things like this when facing people we don't like wondering how best to make them suffer. Feel maybe Dan Wei would love the axe stanza lol ( Dynasty Warriors for those not in the know ) Nothing wrong with gory thoughts as long as they never manifest. Keep em' coming

[KT]

Wow, that was a really gorey poem! lol Psychotic-ness was the vibe I was getting when I read it. :) I think it has a great flow, and you wrote it very well. Great job!

[tanaya]

This is a tad psychotic! But still awesome! There's a type of beat to it that makes it better! I don't know if that is just me but it is good! Awesome yet psychotic poem! Hope you don't actually do this XD