Here I GO...

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                  Here I GO….

 

You take a part of ME

Me, every time you LEAVE.

Leave like a STORM,

Storm that wasn’t meant to BE.

Be as you LIKE.

Like a sword leaving SCARS,

Scars that REMAIN,

Remain as Marks.

Marks of love, anger and HATE.

Hate as you CAN.

Can I hate YOU?

You who DIED,

Died the day you LEFT.

Left to your world of LOVE,

Love that I LOST.

Lost I am FOREVER.

Forever being a long TIME,

Time that I don’t WANT.

Want I not the LIFE,

Life without YOU.

So here I GO,

Jump.

Reviews

[Rm]

Awesome expression!....keep going

[Ankita]

thank you :)

[Rm]

Your welcome:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waiiiiiit........
did ya really jump.....???
very well written.....
amazing poetry!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ankita]

Thank you so much :)
I'm glad you loved it :)

and it's not me..it's on you to decide if he/she jumped ;)

[Devanshu Rajput]

I accord with all the reviewers. This is a unique write, I must say. Keep writing!

I wonder, why can't I rate this poem?

Devanshu

[Ankita]

Thank you so much Dewanshu :)

Well i'll change the settings and then you can rate it :)

Was hesitating a bit actually :)
Besides I believe art of any form cannot be rated..:)
It's something to be felt. :)

[Arunima]

Very different way of expressing...clever ....Liked it ...read it twice and will be reading it again....:):)KUDOS,sis!

[Ankita]

Thank You so much dear :)

[Arunima]

Pleasure's all mine...:)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I like your inspiration about the life. Your last lines are wonderful

Want I not the LIFE,
Life without YOU.
So here I GO,
Jump.

[Ankita]

Thank you so much :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[MaryJaneB]

A lot of sadness, anger and betrayal.
Is the person going to end their life?

[Ankita]

It's up to you to decide if the person end his/her life or just jumps over the thought of that person. :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

This is a very clever poem, the way the last word on a line is repeated on the fisrt word of the next line. Certainly builds up some power. I hope she just jumped over a puddle!

[Ankita]

Thank you so much :)
The repetition of the last word and the first word are done intentionally to create that intensity.
and even i hope the person jumped over a puddle.. :D
it's on you to decide :)

[AaronFreitas]

A lot of powerful words in this write! Awesome work :)

[Ankita]

thank you so much :)