The First One

The guy i'm talking about here isn't the one in the other poems, this is a different guy :) yeah, it sucks...there is more to the story...

Is there such thing as love at first sight?

When I saw you, my heart took flight.

I wanted to know everything about you,

 but there was nothing that I could do.

As I watched your crippled walk,

I'd listen to you as you talk.

You were all I could think about,

 but in my mind there was a cloud of doubt.

When you became my friend,

 my heart began to mend.

When I started to feel love's art,

 we were cruely ripped apart.

When I thought we'd be together,

 I found out you were leaving forever.

When I heard a news,

 my mind was a bomb with an unstopable fuse.

In the name of love, I am a fool.

But love is insanely cruel....

Reviews

[Aggie Skeleton]

It's not pathetic. I know who you're talking about... I LOVE YOU!!!!!

[Mithridate]

yay! first review! ...it's a stupid poem :)....i'm so pathetic, which means you're pathetic!....wow.....lolz