Come home

Crappy tittle. And another oldie :)

The rose you gave me is going black.

I want you home, and I need you back.

I see your face in the darkest night.

I hope you're okay, and I hope you're alright.

Will you ever decide to come home?

I'm really tired of being alone.

Reviews

[Solitary Dreamer]

Aww this is a sad poem.. you're not alone! I'm here for you!:)

[Doreen]

This is short, yet it says what needs to be said. I can feel the pain and the sadness in the words. There are things in this that I can personally relate to. Interesting the way you set this up in sentence form.