Heart

Yay! sucky tittle! And another oldie! Hoorah!

I feel the pain of this beating heart.

I feel it break and rip apart.

The feelings come, the love starts to flood.

 I start to feel my heart leak blood.

You're so kind, and your heart is so pure.

My pain is a disease, and you are the cure.

Are you coming? I want you near.

When will it be? I need you here.

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, for being on a general subject, your take on desire is original
and passionately devised in form, that fits the emphasis of the meaning
perfectly, the metaphorical anaolgoes are powerful, reminds me
ofa wanting love but just falling short, excellent job, keep it up

[Solitary Dreamer]

Awwww That was so sad and I know how you feel. You will get through it and i will help u. :)

[Aggie Skeleton]

That's sad. I like it.