sunrises

When the sunsets

I know I have arrived

to this endless night

of defining sound and hopeless 

wonder oh see it not for I am 

not in this world 

I hide my sorrow of tomorrow

I can't bear it

for the sun rises

~Sav

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Love the work, but you may need a steel hand to rule those other thoughts. When I read something I see the reflection, the after thought of inspiration. I liked this but I found more control than I expected.

[Savanna]

thanks for the feedback

[Lacuna Badtz]

I love how much of an impact you have left in such a short poem. Great combination of imagery and emotion.