Tad And Delia

A girls imaginary friends

Tad and Delia they live in a tree 

they are only three

I see them at night and

in the day

Tad and Delia 

come play

Tad is always mad

I always wonder why

Delia wont tell

the secrets they hide

Daddy says 

They are not real

But yes Daddy they are

They are the shadows behind me 

Cant you see?

Author's Note

Boredom= Creativity

Reviews

[AlexValkyrie]

Intriguing. I see nothing needing improvement. You've done a great job writing this. :)

[Savanna]

Thank you Alex :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

This one is really good. It has an air of creepiness, like those stories you hear of children seeing and playing with ghosts. Very nice writing, Savannah

[Savanna]

Thank you for the review thats what i was trying to achieve with this . :D

[Bright Ocean Star]

Yeay! That is great! Sometimes, I miss the point, and am way off. I'm happy I got this one..:)

[Anonymous -]

Nothing worse than being scared of your own shadow , not that's what you meant , just reminded me of it. I like your poem !

[Savanna]

:) Lol i actually never thought of that but now that you say that it kinda makes sense to the poem.
Thanks for commenting and i'm glad you like it

[Sami Khalil]

Very intersting rhyming poem in some cases...Bravo...................

[Savanna]

Thank you for commenting :) it means alot

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome..:)....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome..:)....

[J Johnson III]

Very intriguing piece. Keep writing for sure.

[Savanna]

Thanks ^_^ i havent been here in awhile and just came back so thnks for the comment :)

[J Johnson III]

No problem.