❧SUMMER OF LOVE ❦

Hope of having a ' summer love' with with the one you know you will never have... not even a second.

You're the most handsome guy under the sun,

I know a place where we can dance

Swimmingly cool nights and tropical days

Will you come with me if I asked you to?

Tell me do I have a chance?

Campers going down the road, 

little girls in sundresses

And colorful ice-cream cones.

In the sea of love with you i would dive.

I'd jump for joy like a kangaroo

I feel so captivated;

Under your spell- what have you done? 

Tell me quick, Do you love me too?

You hold the fire in the circle of your heart

 like the taste of Sauvignon Blanc wine

I hope to see you again some time

Someday, you will change your mine....

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

Aww! The poem is very sad from my point of view. A girl that hopes a guy will accept to go with her. There is a lot imagery and season-time description to it, which makes it all together a beautiful piece!

[Annie S]

I truly appreciate your comment thank you so much :)

[Inspiring Writer]

An Interesting plus an awesome write. Keep writing. An excellent job you did. I liked this poem.

[Annie S]

thank you.. i guess practice makes perfect :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome, yes, you're right "PRACTICE MAKES A MAN PERFECT" :) So, go on :)

[Annie S]

lol i see okay a 'man' i agree then :)

[Inspiring Writer]

lol HAHAH, NO NO.. i meant a WOMAN ALSO CAN... HAHAHAH it was only a proverb.. haha, and it applies on ever HUMAN, hope you're a HUMAN TOO not an Angel i'm talking with :) Hahahahah

[Annie S]

ahaaaa lol well i know what you meant just making you laugh
just feel that u need it
and yes! i am i human.... arent I? (. _. ) omg lol

[Inspiring Writer]

Hahah, me too know, me too meant to make you smiley :)
me too felt you needed that :) lol
read moreHahah, me too know, me too meant to make you smiley :)
me too felt you needed that :) lol
really.. ohh, i .c.. thank god you cleared the doubt, i was thinking that i'm talking to an ANGEL who's gonna hug me tight in her arms after the conversations... HAHAHAH :)

[Annie S]

lol wow.. ookay :)

[Lucien Maier]

interesting. It sounds very deep and thought out. Nicely done