LOST IN THE DUNES

painting a picture

Created by the wind, the mystery of silenced dust.

Standing alone with the accompaniment of the flaming sun

Has nowhere to go or nowhere to hide its nakedness.

The obstacle is now covered with sand, drowning into thin air.

Screams of help cannot be recognised.

As it slowly sank to the edge of darkness,

The sun sets with satisfaction.

 

The disappearance cannot be overlooked,

But cast a shadow of liveliness.

It waits for being rescued to see the earth again,

While the sand moves to a different direction.

For now it is lost, innocence of nature will abide.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Nice write, I did imagine some views of this short write... in my mind. A clear pic. you shown us of 'LOST IN DUNES' through making this piece. I liked this shorty poem. Words're powerful much and each one's strongly penned. Keep writing. Great job once again.

[Annie S]

Thank you for your comment
I appreciate that

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome and Thank you for making such a poem
I appreciate that ;)

[Annie S]

well glad you like it.

[Prritiy]

the only thing permanent is change, nice poem on the change clearly seen in deserts, the sand dunes changing shapes.

best wishes

[Annie S]

Thank you very much :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description in the poem. Nature allowed us to see and know the beauty and power of nature. Dunes show us. All things can change. Few things last forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Annie S]

Thank you for your comment
Glad you liked it :)

[M.D. Aguiar]

Cryptic, but occasionally beautiful. I found it enjoyable. You seem creative; I think you would benefit from expanding your vocabulary so as to express the more nuanced machinations of your mind.

[Annie S]

yes i agree expanding my vocabulary is is what i'm trying to do thank you :)

[Tom]

Nice poem about the ever shifting sands, just wondering what it was covering up and will it ever be seen again? Or is that one the reader must guess or leave to their own imagination?

Nice curious poem, well put together !

[Annie S]

I have a very specific idea of it and it will be seen again unless the sand moves a different direction. you can also imagine it as you wish. Hope that helps and thank you :)