MIRABELLA

An emergency...

Authentic white blooms flourishing to see the world.

Sipping coffee as I see its revolution,

From a secure stem to a seed so empty and tedious.

It has been cloaked, by its creamy petals,

So responsive and different to the flower, ‘New Love’

The illumination of its colour gives reflection to my coffee

Its smell gives an outburst of a trivial scent like a baby’s breath.

 

I watched as the rain gently dribbles down unto its petals.

As the crisp wind gorged through the branches,

Petals struck down like snow disguised unto my dress.

The feeling of passion wanting to be close.

Smiling blissfully as I touch its delicate petals that were twisted.

Thrills of being intact into my shielded hands,

Never being lost or afraid, but amicable as I carried it away.

Reviews

[Edmund S. Obumba]

Hi Annie!
Wow..I remember the first time you published and asked for reviews and you were a little hesitant thinking you were below par..
But if we were to commend anyone for such poetic growth,it definately is you!!
I like your articulation in this piece,it gives me the eagerness to see this beautiful sight(that apparently isnt in Africa)
nice writing,hats off !

[Annie S]

Ever since i came here i thought i was writing terribly, but i completely forgot this account that my uncle had to remind me lol i'm back now if you want me to review any of your work i'm more than happy to :) I can never forget the first time i published thank you ever so much for this review it means a lot

[Edmund S. Obumba]

You have a beautiful sense of description..well put in a simple and understandable language..that is what poetry is all about...to be understood.Beautiful piece!

[Annie S]

Thank you so much! :)

[Chandler bing]

hey good job I wish I was that good :(

[Annie S]

Am sure you are much better than me :) and thank you

[Chandler bing]

naah you are just being modest now.

[Annie S]

lol no i just have faith in people

[zainul]

Very sweet poem.
Adore its beauty.

[Annie S]

Thank you for your comment

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)

[Tom]

What a splendid affinity you have created with this beautiful flowering plant !

Wonderful creative writing and imagery, poetry perfection I say !

[Annie S]

Thank you Tom. Your comment wants me to write again