What Have I Done?

am confused as to what you want from me

The sun is setting slowly. As I watch it go, I  could feel the burning sensation of my 

eyes, fade away.

But the pain in my heart, still lingers inside. I want it to stop, but It's  impossible because It stained my heart, like blood stains it's clothes. Why is this happening to me?

I felt like I deserved it, but I haven't done anything wrong. Tell me, what is it?

The tears from my cheek, flows like a running stream. My day has been a disaster, and yet it gets worse. You've left me thinking in suspense and trying to figure out, 'what have I done?'

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

A true heartfelt emotional write i read in the evening time, i liked it, the pain's floating over the words you used in the write. Liked this piece, great job once again.

[Annie S]

Well thanks you :D

[Inspiring Writer]

Well, My pleasure ;)

[Annie S]

:) lol it is indeed

[Inspiring Writer]

Hahah,, yeh, it is much indeed, even always ;)

[anumenon]

great yaar i expect this is not ur personal experience

[Annie S]

oh it is.. most of them are :)

[Lucien Maier]

good emotion, but I would love to see it take a direction later in the piece.
Ire what did you do with all this pain?

[Annie S]

i shared my pain to people like you... writers

[Sami Khalil]

Good question and a good poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Annie S]

thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Celestial Witch Child]

It leaves me curious and intrigued...

[Annie S]

is that a good thing? :/

[Celestial Witch Child]

Of course! (:

[Annie S]

oh...okay x