Yearning

The things they don't know

The things they don't see

What I write in the dark

Is someone I'll be

Reviews

[Robert]

Short but wisely chosen words that describe so much.

[Anne Verona]

Thank you :)

[~]

Some food for thought here as to what would the person turn out to be if they were their story in secrecy.

[Anne Verona]

Yes indeed it is.

Thank you :)

[MsJewel]

Simple words and yet so very powerful. Brilliant writing!

:) Julie

[Anne Verona]

Thank you Julie :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...the yearning. I remember how I started, sitting cross legged on my bed with my smith corona on my lap. Those were the best times!

The impact of your closing line hits hard...well done, Anne!

[Anne Verona]

Thank you Kelly :) lol. I suddenly wish I had a typewriter. I've always wondered how it would be like to write with one.