Women

Really Short, but great.

A women came from a man's ribs.

Not from his feet to be stomped on.

But from his side,

to be equal.

Under his arm,

to be protected.

And by his heart,

to be loved.

Reviews

[paul]

yes. very good. kind of a magic little poem. b ut i like the other two of yours i ve read so far better

[lyssilou]

you said it and i think it is a great short little poem that shows equality between man and woman.

[Rebekah Joy]

amen

[Annie29]

Oh,
no it's suppose to be MAN
I apologize (:

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

This is a beautiful, short poem. I personally cannot seem to convey so much meaning in so little time. Very well done! There are a couple little errors in the first line, but if those are intentional ignore me.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words were true and the story was very good. Woman should be treated with respect. Without woman we would not be here to show we are graceful for them. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[HappyTaylor]

Perfect. :D