I wrote this when I was about 11

I can't help it that
my life falls in a rythmatic pattern.
Rings on my fingers
as if I were Saturn.
What to say when
I never learn
My words are my Scrabble peices
and it's always my turn.

Author's Note

I wrote this a long time ago....
I barely remember so I dont remember what I was thinking at the time.
I was probably just making my words rhyme (:

Reviews

[paul]

wow. another great poem. f*****g great. my favorite: rings on my finger , as if i were saturn. amazing : in your notes said: probably just rhyming your words: because i don t like rhyming poetry. except this one. and it s not the rhyming i like: it s everything else. this poem says so much

[Stephanie]

Pretty insightful for 11 years old :) I love the last two lines. It reminds me that words are always ours and we never have to answer to someone else when it comes to what we want to say. I love it!