Dream

As you're thrown down

helplessly

I watch with ease

 

As you wail

desperately

A solemn tear runs down my cheek

 

As she hurts you

I sit silently

Watching others dream

 

I cannot dream as they do

so peacefully and soundly;

their beliefs so pure

 

I cannot sleep as they do

In the midst of such terror

That has now become my childish nightmare.

 

Until this nightmare ends

I pray...

 

somehow this darkness

will turn to light.

 

 

Reviews

[Lacinius]

I really do like this. Its not over-wordy which makes it great. The emotion flows well through it and I deffinitely had a good image going. Seriously, good write.

[Bluet_Belle]

I agree with Ari, it is filled with emotion.

I like that it is vague, but it is so naked.

It shows so much without distinct, exact, close details.

Good write:)

[Ari]

This really conveys a lot of emotion. Great work.