Give

There's really no meaning behind this....The phrases just came into my head and sorta strung together...It may not be the best. Actually, it's quite jumbled...

Waiting with open arms.

Do you see me?

Screaming at the top of my lungs.

Do you hear me?

Crying with a broken heart.

Do you dare fix it?

 

You may have it if you wish.

Take it.

It is yours.

I'm offering it to you...

 

But you do not wish;

you want.

You do not see;

you hope.

You do not hear;

you ask.

 

I could pound these very walls

you would not hear

I could scream into the eternity of forever

you wouldn't shed a tear...

 

I gave my heart to you.

Did I give too easily?

Reviews

[Emily B]

an instinctive-thoughtful write. nice combination.

[Lacinius]

i really like this...
it kind of reminds me of how i am feeling.
and sometimes, the poems that hav no meaning specifically,
turn out to be the best for someone else =]

[Midnight]

Oh, that was just brilliant. I love it!