Left without Goodbye

So she left without a goodbye
And didn’t come back for his “why???”
What would have been her reason?
Why did she leave in the cloudburst season?
It kept drizzling heavily within her heart
But maintaining a smile was her beautiful art
Her smile made the sun shine brightly
Within her wrecked heart the rain poured politely
She kept waiting for her friend
But he never came, she waited till the end
Now I don’t know where she has gone
Maybe lost in the darkness of dawn
Since all your concern for her was a lie
Maybe that’s why she left without a goodbye

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This is a beautiful poem, with a powerful ending. I love it. Rating 100# and adding to my favorites. I really wanna see more of your poetry.

[Blessing In Disguise]

Thank u :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Blessing In Disguise]

:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol :) :)

[Shah Sabia]

I can feel it all, too good seriously.
:)

[Blessing In Disguise]

I am glad you liked it :D

[Shah Sabia]

I am glad you are glad because of me :p

[wordman]

a sad write,she left without a goodbye

check the 4 th line for left

[Blessing In Disguise]

Blessing In Disguise
Thank you so much wordman :) i did the corrections

[wordman]

you`re welcome