I wonder will she

Do people describe haikus using up to 255 words? I know this isn't a haiku, but d'you see my point?

I wonder will she like my new fragrance

My eau de toilette, oh let’s call it that

On the left hand, Paul Smith, the one I chanced

To buy; on the right, Joop, that I did not

Buy, but it’s strong, just how she likes it. What

A difference a spray makes, that’s what she’d say

If she was pretty witty, and quite hot

When it comes down to old ditties. As May

Becomes June, maybe soon there’ll be a ray

(Of sunshine, not of sting - oh, police!). Once

We kissed, but I’ve been missing her. My hat

Ain’t layin’ at her home. But yesterday

Even our sweat smelled sweet, and both our pants

Combined on floor, in bed, with cigarettes

Author's Note

Paul Smith and Joop are both spray-on perfumes / aftershave / eau de toilette, whatever you prefer to call it, for men!

Reviews

[Tony]

Polo is the one I like for me, and this was another nice journey down Antonionio Lane.
And yes, I see your point.

[closed account]

hmmm I wonder what you both were doing yesterday!! lol,, cute poem.. I prefer Catolina Herrera for men, you should smell it maybe you have,, lol IDK.. she will looooooooove it!!!!