Alone In the Cosmos

universe, math, lyrics, alone, destroy

Lost in darkness not a particle of light 

The Black hole of life sucking me dry 

Withering away my might 

I'm a black dwarf on my last dying days 

A victim to your entropy 

Your rule of chaos 

Nature is your game

Order to disorder 

Sub atomic madness 

Caged consciousness 

In orbit your lies like gravity pull me down 

And I am but a dot in this plane of empty space 

Unlimited in caged thought 

Lost in the dark 

The absolute is frozen in time 

Vanity in the void 

Because nothing it was and nothing it remains

Reviews

[TaiPie]

"Unlimited in caged thought"

For some reason, this line really stuck out because of the two spectrum's in this line. Limitless thoughts, but caged. This poem feels like it's reflecting the chaos that's trapped, in my opinion.

I feel it would help if you broke it up into stanza's, but that's just my personal opinion. Wonderful job :D