The endless space to be conquered

Just a random thoughts tied in a poem

They say that my life is destroyed,

They say my life has been ruined to ashes,

They say a loser like me should end his life,

Should i believe them and end it all,

Or should i give it another chance?

I am down at my back,

They are laughing at me,

They are cursing me,

But only thing i can see is the open sky,

The unconquered endless space in front of me,

Tell them that I have fallen and not died,

Tell them that I sill have in me to survive,

Age is just a number for me till my passion is alive,

Warrior I have been and warrior i will die,

My body might give up but my soul won't,

I will get up again and fight,

From the ruins of my past, I will build a new life,

From the debris of my dreams, I will create a future which will be mine,

Now that I have seen the worst,

I am ready to be at my best,

I wont give up, happen what may,

I will stand again to fight.

Author's Note

criticism welcomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Now that I have seen the worst,
I am ready to be at my best,
I wont give up, happen what may,
I will stand again to fight."
Can never give-up or give-in. I liked the above lines. Positive and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Riddhi]

Your words are very inspirational and they just justify that it is never too late to do something good and interesting...Great work.....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind words and your kind review...thank you :)

[Riddhi]

Welcome....

[jesserose99]

I love this Anurag...'tell them that I have fallen and not died', yes...that is what you tell them. your words are inspirational for getting back up again. lovely

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for your kind review.... :)

[WhiteWillow]

We all get knocked down now and then, but how we respond is a testament to the strength of our will. Lovely piece.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you for the kind words :)

[Zahra]

A powerful, motivating piece. Thanks for posting.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for your kind words

[B]

This is beautiful
the journey within
to not give up and live again
is beautiful

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much :)

[annalysiar]

This is an excellent inspiring poem...sometimes poetry can be critiqued and edited, carved into perfection. But a poem like this is like natural art. Excellent in its natural beauty

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind and lovely words :)

[annalysiar]

Oh you're kind. And you're welcome. Excellent poetry deserves lovely words

[Sami Khalil]

"They are laughing at me,
They are cursing me,
But only thing i can see is the open sky,
The unconquered endless space in front of me,"

Your poetic spirit is soaring, your fighting spirit is unmatched. An excellent poem...:)....................

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir for the kind words :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir.....:)....

[nazia]

PHOENIX.. that's what comes to my mind.. Truly inspiring. One who builds himself from the ashes of his defeats is a true warrior. Loved it :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Nazia :)

[Tania]

Beautifully written .. I love it
truly inspiring ....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much :)