When the sun sets...

Enjoying the sunset ....most lovable memory

When the sun sets...

The light of hope , spread all over the lush ,
Golden rays imparting it's beauty over the men ,
Hoping to invigorate the fresh ,
Under the sheet of blue ocean ,
Deep ocean
Which offered us to ,
Aspire ... Respire ,
And it sets , sets with hope , hope to explore ,
And sets ... And sets ... And finally that illusion of happiness sets .
�"Anushka joshi .

Author's Note

I am attaching the pic that I saw while writing this ...
Hope you enjoyed it ..after a long time
Thank you .

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I see this as how the night allows us to dream of what could be...how the dark hides the truth...so we hope the truth will soon be what we hope it will be.
and each sunrise allows for that possibility. I also think the slant rhyme in this poem with first four lines.
Nicely expressed here,
j.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you sir for your kind review

[Sairaa ...]

:) Love your writings. Truly.

[Sairaa ...]

Yes absolutely there is a light of hope everywhere which keep us motivating for the sake of good

[Unspoken poet]

This is so very well written, This is wonderful

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ...Kay ...

[Hercules94]

Really great piece of peotry. Loved it

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you Mr. ...

[Dave Brown]

I always enjoy the peace of the evening as the sun sets softy leaving all worries behind (maybe)

[Anushka joshi]

Yes sir !! Thank you for your kind review

[Rye]

such a wonderful write, kind of intriguing as well. nicely written

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much Rye !

[msharma]

Very nicely expressed. Each word is full of good possibility. An optimistic poem.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am