Frozen ...

When we feel like Frozen ...

Frozen ... 

Will it ever be possible

 To combat and trounce Our notion . 

Will I ever overcome

 that state of Frozen...

Author's Note

Please read and let me know about your notion regarding this ...

Reviews

[Aradhana]

one must never lose hope as no one knows the god's will. Prominent feelings are seen though . I like strong poems also my notion will be that everything is possible if he wants and it is going to be impossible even though how much u try also here our will and mindset comes in act as we are what our thoughts make us....

[Anushka joshi]

Actually when I wrote this poem I was in a dilemma , I am an Indian so my English is not so good but I try my best and everyday learn some new things . If you browse Instagram and comfortable with me please share your Id in personal mail .
Aj

[Aradhana]

Ho te nav vachun samazla mala ki tu indian h and also joshi h toh marathi na??.. well the poem was good if it lacks Something it doesn't mean that it is not worth it...maybe it is what u actually wanted to show that we saw...be optimistic always.

[Anushka joshi]

Marathi nhi babes uttrakhand ki hu

[Aradhana]

Ohhhh..nhi qki Maharashtra me joshi mostly brahmin marathi hote h 🤔😐😀

[Anushka joshi]

hmm bhi brahmin pahadi h uttarakhand k

[Aradhana]

Ohh I don't know much abt it. Just heard stories from my mom.. btw how is it there?? Weather little ok?!

[Neville]

................ this is really cool & colder than permafrost :)

[Anushka joshi]

Ohh !! I wonder why I have ❄️ cold.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I like the brevity of this and the message seems to be of someone feeling all alone and longing to feel warmth again. Personally I would erase the word 'from' in the final line and simply have it as 'Will I ever overcome that state of Frozen...'

[Anushka joshi]

Okay , yes you are right sir . I always welcome the suggestions from all . If you find any correction in other of my writings then you are warmly welcomed . Thank you for your golden words and precious time

[Chris Shaw]

Whenever I think of being frozen, I think of being frozen with fear. That is far worse than feeling cold.

Chris

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you for your kind words ma'am .
In India recently we were now days celebrating a festival of ganesh chaturthi . you can google it . It's a very big festive season in India . I don't know why but I love to tell you all about this . Being an Indian my English is not so good as yours .... So I am sorry for my bad English 😅😅

[Chris Shaw]

Your English is good. No need to apologise and I love to hear about all things Indian. All good wishes to you.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am

[Sairaa ...]

So strong feelings in this poem I t took some time for me to understand but according to my notions yes it is possible