Fallen Love

When the chords are pulled,
And the heart is strained.
The organ will fail,
As the pain begins.

The heart as an organ,
Keeps our body alive.
As it is broken,
It lies in pieces.

What love can bind,
And piece it together.
To heal the wounds,
And repair the soul.

How can love help,
If it is lost?
How can love help,
If it cannot be found?

Love can repair,
The largest of wounds.
Love can lift,
The lowest of spirits.

This lost love,
cannot be found.
As the loneliness spreads,
And the fallen give up.

Reviews

[Atosa]

This is so beautiful.

[AngelEyes15]

I really like this poem, you express your writing with emotion. I think you hit the right topics about love :)
i enjoyed it

[Aussie]

Beautiful. Love conquers all.
Favoriting this piece. Good work.

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

beautiful
a grate poem
well done
i like this
:)

[Jasmarine]

Considering I read this at a time that wasn't exactly under good circumstances, I hated this poem. But re-reading it and thinking about its meaning, it enstills a sense of hopelessness in the author, almost like you've given up. Things happen for a reason, but that doesn't mean you should give up and sit out. Use it as a learning experience. I love the poem, it's very deep and meaningful.

[Taylor H.]

This was a great poem. The first stanza had a rhyme scheme and flowed better than the other stanza's but thats just me. This was a great poem. I just want to point out that not only does love fix the pain, it can be the cause as well.

[Jessica Danielle]

wow. i can totally relate to this. its beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful and sad. At the end of a relationship. Heart need time to heal. Description and story told completely in so few words. Takes a talented writer to do that. A excellent poem.
Coyote