Last

As I cry myself to sleep,
You're the last thought that I'll keep.
As I cry myself to sleep,
I know it will be my last peace.

All of these feelings,
Bottled up inside.
All of these feelings,
Are from when I tried.

Life is fleeting,
As it flies by.
Life is fleeting,
As I die.

The heart shatters,
As it gives a final stand.
The heart shatters,
As my life is damned.

This is my final stand,
As there is nothing left.
This is my final stand,
As I draw my last breath.

Reviews

[Katelin]

So sad =( But I like it. Well done =)

[Lettie]

This is rather amazing. I really enjoyed reading it, and I could not stop myself from reading it over. With each word I can feel the emotion and pain. Really extraordinary.

[Nafttirb1]

A poem from the heart.

[Erin Lee]

so sad!!!! the loss of a lover or friend or even a crush is always very hard. we don't get a chance to morn those things in the way we'd morn an actual death. i know the feeling of wanting to die inside upon losing those things. so the analogy here is not lost on me. i love how simple and to the point this poem is. thanks for sharing it.