Once Forsaken

Though I've been forsaken,

I've yet to be taken,

As my talented heart,

Has failed yet to start,

With my well open mind,

I find myself in a bind,

To make but one choice,

Of which I must voice.

What am I feeling,

With these cards I've been dealing.

Being told by the fates,

To march through those gates,

And walk down these halls,

To get past your walls.

As I peer unto thy soul,

It must take its toll,

I feel my heart break,

If you look to forsake,

But if you will heal,

Then I might feel,

My heart start to mend,

As I try love again.

Reviews

[Ashley]

Ok so all of your love poems are really good!

[Livenrite]

Loved Loved Loved it!!! Went straight to the heart. Great rhyming and great flow! Keep it up:)

[Daydreamer54]

Wow! great rhyme scheme and I really enjoyed reading your poem! :)

[hollie]

i wish it was that easy just to heal and love again this is a beautiful poem i really love it