Open Up

I'm tired of this game,

Of riddles and rhymes,

We need to do the same,

And get with the times.

We know how we're feeling,

It's not that revealing,

Stay in stride,

Do not hide.

Open your heart,

That's where we'll start.

Both of us bloom,

Up and out of this gloom.

Make each other smile,

Make it last awhile.

Take the chance,

Let our souls dance.

Reviews

[Ashley]

I really like this one as well. Your rhyming helps it keep moving at a good pace, and the words create good pictures in my mind.

[New]

This is really beautiful. I need to send this message to a certain someone, haha. I like it! I like it alot!

[hollie]

wow i love this poem my fav. so far