Forevermore

Even though you may no hear, see, or feel someone anymore, the love you have for them still shines through.

I don't hear your voice

The calm, soothing sound,

I miss it in my heart,

Every moment we are apart.

The world all surrounding,

Has hidden your face from sight,

I can't remember it's beauty,

It is but faded memory.

I no longer feel your touch,

We've put this distance between us.

I am numbed to its joy,

Something not even a kiss could employ

Like a silence in a forest,

Or a veil on wedding's day,

Even being numb to the core,

I will still love you, forevermore

Reviews

[Alicia Huntley]

I enjoyed reading this and know the feeling. I think the poem loses a bit of it flow, however, when the rhyme in verse two is not employed in the same way. Keep it in mind and keep writing! Thanks for sharing :)

[Apebble]

Hmmm. The rhyme pattern is ABCC. Beauty - Memory acting as the C pattern in verse 2. Maybe I'm missing something :D

[Alicia Huntley]

Don't stress too much about it. It is just not as strict of a rhyme as the others so it loses some of the effect. It works its just I did not find it as powerful.

[Apebble]

Alrighty then :D I'll take a look if I can find a better fit. I often spit these out extremely fast without much (if any) edits, so it's worth a re-look. Thanks for the review and opinions :)