Chapter 1 ~ The Word

Chapter 1 ~ The Word

A Chapter by Golden Shotgun

 Blake sat at the breakfast table eating, while watching the newest news of a deathly pale looking man speaking through the TV. Without doubt this was the president of America, and is updating us on more news around the world. His hair looked frizzy, and ghost white, and it matched his skin color he had dark bags under his eyes as if he was stressing for a long time.

 

 " As threats worsen in Afghanistan, we're still waiting response on the treaty that we proposed the Tali ban, if we don't hear word from them in a f - " the TV flicked off, and so did the power. It came on again after a quick second, but Blake was not interested in turning back on the TV.

 

  " So honey, are you getting ready for school now? " Blake was 15, and he hated when his mom babied him in the mornings. " Yes mom, I thought i told you i'm grown up now " his mom tried to hide a laugh, but Blake never commented on it. " Well sorry my little man, go clean your self up in the bathroom your not leaving my house like that. "

 

  Blake let off a sigh before walking to the bathroom, there house was pretty small 2 bath, 3 bedroom, and a living room, and kitchen one story house. Blake flicked on his bathroom light were he looked at him self in the mirror.


  He had very dark brown hair, almost a certain black color, and his face was tanned from being outside a lot with his friends. He was not far by the fittest person in school, but he could jog for a good 50 minutes, and sprint full out for a good 25. He was about 5'10 he was average for his age.


  After a few minutes of brushing his teeth, and combing - or well spiking his hair into little points he was done with self grooming. He left the bathroom, and flicked off the light, and headed for the door.


  When Blake made it outside the smell of car fumes, and trucks had hit him in the face. The world was a lot less clean now a days, gas is on a shortage so people are trying to event new ways of gas - failing a lot. He started off down his average place in town, and herd some yelling off in the distance.


  He looked to the side and noticed it in between two of the apartment buildings in front of his house, he made a short jog over the street, and looked in the ally. He noticed a man standing there he looked as if he'd been deprived of food for a good amount of time, and had burn marks on his hands.


  Blake knew if he went over he would probably be late for school, but he did any way. He went up to the man, he didn't seem to notice Blake. Blake placed his hand on his shoulder, and in a blink of a eye he felt his arm snap back, and he was thrown onto the ground. The man had him pinned with his knee into his back. " Who are you ! Who sent you ! "


  Blake being totally stunned he managed to stammer out one line " My names Blake "



© 2011 Golden Shotgun


Author's Note

Golden Shotgun
I would like to say sorry for the boring chapter, please stick with this story though it will get much better.

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Nice choice of words, not boring at all. I loved how you had no spelling mistakes, go ryan! The plot is good, very well written. The description of the appearance of the main character is also pretty good. Great Job Ryan, keep writing or I'll punch you in the face. Btw, like my sexy review?

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Nice choice of words, not boring at all. I loved how you had no spelling mistakes, go ryan! The plot is good, very well written. The description of the appearance of the main character is also pretty good. Great Job Ryan, keep writing or I'll punch you in the face. Btw, like my sexy review?

Posted 14 Years Ago


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niiiiice

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Golden Shotgun
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Well my name is Ryan, and I love writing. Well I don't "love" it I suppose, i mean this will be the first time I'll write a story for the public to see. I hope to start up very well on this website, m.. more..