Through Her Eyes�

A Poem by APoetsMuse

lesbian, love, wife

Through all of lives little painful experiences you learn to some how live,
You learn that life can suck you up and spit you out and yet you continue to give.
You give to those who you believe deserve your love and all of your desire,
But when it’s all over, your heart and your mind feel like an electric wire.
Exposed to a world of pain and fears,
You loved her so much yet she didn't hear.
The love in your voice that was eternally hers,
So you cry cause your left with just these words.
Your ready to die to give up on all hope of life,
That one day you'll be happy and find that great wife.

© 2008 APoetsMuse

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Silent Kim aka mizmetap..

Nice work, you can hear the dissappointment, the hurt and longing in this poem. it flows smoothly and effortless. You have some really nice lines like this:

But when it's all over, your heart and your mind feel like an electric wire.

Excellent.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Ivory

so much emotion in this piece
nicely written ... : )

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on September 17, 2008

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APoetsMuse

Bronx, NY

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What can I say about myself..hmmm.. I love to write. I love to write poems and short horror stories. I am currently in the works of releasing my own book of poetry. Hopefully early fall 2016 .. more..