Million Pieces of Mine

Came back, went away.

Never sure . . .

. . . to go or stay.

Left the shore, gone away.

Has my soul . . .

. . .returned today?

Wandering here, Wandering there.

Unreasonable thing . . .

. . . The million pieces of mine won't sing.

Until I know for sure, for sure.

Here or there.

When or where,

Return to me, my heart, my soul.

Million pieces of mine.

Million pieces of my whole.

Reviews

[Life's Imagery In Time]

Makes me wish we could get back the pieces of us that are torn away or we give away.....very touching and moving

[Lorry]

Lovely words. I wonder where it went to? Sometimes, it feels like we are hollow, but it lways returns to us, hopefully in better condition than it was.

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous and fitting. Your style is wonderful. Very precise and lovely....:::)))

[PhoenixDown]

A polished piece. Says a lot about you as a writer.
Considered yourself accepted. Thank you for finding me.

Phoenix

[songbirdwriting]

I love the flow of the poem - this is beautiful!

[ajelly]

Thanks, a million . . . I haven't added anything in over week. But, getting back around feels so good again!

[songbirdwriting]

Great that you're back then! I just got here a few days ago, so I don't have a lot of writing up - but I'll definitely add more, and also check out some more of yours!

[ajelly]

I look forward to doing the same, my dear!