Velvet love

A Poem by ajelly

that moment that remains suspended in your emotions, an impasse

Turnt

Never saw it coming

this sweet impasse emotion.

Tho truthfully,

It was great,

sweet velvet love.

© 2017 ajelly

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Ruth	Serene it its soft flow, a beautiful suspension of time, wonderful :) Posted 8 Years Ago Serene it its soft flow, a beautiful suspension of time, wonderful :) Rating /100

...	Love it! Powerful poetry. Starz x Posted 8 Years Ago Love it! Powerful poetry. Starz x Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

I think you sum up perfectly what confuses and confounds us most of our life, that it is in the knowing of what love could be and could have been that we learn the harshest of lessons in life. How long do we strive for perfection, while not seeing that it's the imperfections that we love most. Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 2, 2016
Last Updated on January 23, 2017

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ajelly

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A light-hearted soul - that revels in simplicity of innocent observations - not afraid of exploring the edges of the unknown places ... Looking forward to having place to share my thoughts, never .. more..