The Fly on My Keyboard

A fly landed on my keyboard.... a bit of silliness

Goodbye

dead fly

why’d you choose to lie

on my letter ‘Y’

 

If you had only chosen ‘P’

you might still be

alive

 

And now I’m sad

and feeling a bit bad

but with a sigh

I say

goodbye Mr Fly

guess it was your day to die.

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

Love it!!!!!!!, funny, simple,short, a smiler

[forfila]

That is brilliant,, life can mean so much and yet so little sometimes..

[SweetPeachesAlways]

hahaha NOW, that was funny! hahahaha
I love it! I absolutely love it! hahaha
Going in my Favorites for when I need a giggle...

[Nathan Strange]

f*****g flies, I hate flies there was one buzzing around my computer earlier but I didn't catch the b*****d!! I used to kill all insects, I was a insect serial killer. I understand your frustration, and this was a good simple, short and sweet write. Nice one!

[R J Askew]

arf, arf...another little chuckle from me. tis funny in concept and well executed (sic). makes its point quickly and ends. I was pulled into the poem by the title. I felt sorry for the fly, too.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

yukkkkk.....hope you clean him up?
Hate to think about a squished fly on my keyboard. I love the light hearted way you do your poetry....wonderful :)