~Liberating Wings Of Love~

“Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.”

Oscar Wilde

 

 

Retracing the places you drew in my heart

embracing the spaces….. while miles apart

mind chases replacement…. erasing the pain

yet glacial traces… of… recognition remain. 

 

 

Residual reminders find their way into musing

rewinding the clock gets rather confusing

ticking of time assigns………. it’s time to try

redesigning these…. pretty wings… to fly. 

 

 

Yearning, learning….. the game… in order to play

fighting despite obstacles in the way

trials and tribulations linger….. a while

stylishly stamping…… revamping a smile. 

 

 

Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes

seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise

love liberated, deliberately set free

flying high in the sky taking you with me.

 

 

 

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Reviews

[s y e]

// Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes
seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise
love liberated, deliberately set free
flying high in the sky taking you with me. //

Your last stanza is out of this world, April! Sometimes we want to rewind time but we can't, we have to live in the now and accept it, mistakes and all. I agree with everything Ashira has said, we do have to remodel our wings to keep us flying high. I have missed you and reading this!

Gorgeous! xoxo

[AprilRN1210]

Hey Noodle girl!!.. I have missed YOU too!... I admit, this is one of my favorites and am tickled that you enjoyed.. Yes, ma'am!.. exactly... acceptance isn't always easy, but we do what we can with what we have.. we just have to realize that we are stronger and more resilient than we give ourselves credit for!.. life is what we make it.. learning to fly myself.. but it is possible:)
((hugs)) my sassy sweet friend

[GA]

Its nice.....flying high in the sky taking you with me ................ i want it ...There picture is very beautiful.

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed:)

[Ashira Macy]

I love how uplifting the ending on this was. Rewinding the clock really does get too confusing. Not to mention living in the past is just recipe for pain and heartache. Best to remodel those wings as you said and take to the sky in healing swoops. Really beautiful April, I am sorry it took me so long to read it.

[AprilRN1210]

Hey girl!!! Thank you...It does get dang confusing.. I saw SCREW IT, spread these wings and peace out!! lol
nice to see you ma'am.. have missed you.. hope everything is ok.. thank you for this lovely review:)

[Ashira Macy]

Everything is fine, thank you dear. I am just really busy with school lately, so I have less time to do the reading I would like to unfortunately.

[AprilRN1210]

I can empathize with ya there girl.. well, it is nice to see you... I am glad you are well.. :)

[An owl on the moon]

Loved the breathing beauty of the quote leading into your extravagant words... your words are like an enchantment, weaving wings so dreams can learn to fly... Sighing...

[AprilRN1210]

Your reviews always blow me away Craig... They are like elegant beautiful writings in themselves... Thank you sir... I love hearing your thoughts on my work. ;)

[An owl on the moon]

Sending you warm, happy wishes for your weekend, dear friend... :)

[AprilRN1210]

back at ya my sweet friend... :D

[Daniel Eckert]

Very beautiful and amazing poem.

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you, I am tickled you enjoyed..

[Pryde Foltz]

Residual reminders find their way into musing


rewinding the clock gets rather confusing


ticking of time assigns………. it’s time to try


redesigning….. these…. pretty wings… to fly.

Love Oscar Wilde and you did his quote justice with this inspirational write:)

[AprilRN1210]

oh wow, thank you so much! What a compliment.. I am so tickled you enjoyed this..

[Sami Khalil]

I'm lingering now in the beauty of your writes. You are redesigning what is ticking and realigning what is chaotic. You never confuse the muse even with the blues. Those liberating wings of love are soaring by new winds. Excellent...:)..................

[AprilRN1210]

awwwww, thank you Sami.... that muse better not linger in those blues, else I might get confused with the news that I choose to use... lmao.... haha.. see what you have done, you have made me silly!!! I am tickled you enjoyed this one Sami... I admit, one of my new favorites I have done recently... these wings are ready to try--hit the skies and fly!... :D

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I'm just having fun with wonderful writes like this. You are welcome...:)....................

[AprilRN1210]

you are fun anyway Sami.. and I appreciate it.. smile sir, you made me giggle! :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)..............................

[NoelHC]

Another beautiful piece of writing April, I enjoyed this.

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you Noel... I am glad you enjoyed... this one is one of my new favorites, I admit... nice to see you back sir...

[hardeep sabharwal]

title is touchy and no words for the quote of great Oscar wilde,

I agree love is liberating :)

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you... I am glad you enjoyed.. thank you for your time and thoughts... :)

[Trace]

This has a remarkable flow to it, love the meter and rhyme patterns,
and it is quite liberatingly written.

You go girl.

Trace

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you Trace.. I am glad you enjoyed this one, it is one of my new favs... I had fun writing it, and love this song...