The Illusion..

If you would believe..

You could have seen..

What I saw every day..

 

If  you could trust..

You could have come along..

A really long way..

 

If you could love..

You would have known I was right..

 

But you didn’t..

And chose to live the illusion…

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Fantastic and deeply emotive, so direct and succinct, a great poem.

[Searching 4 Serenity]

This is how I feel about an ex-friend who thinks I'm crazy and has threatened to kill me AFTER finding God in my life a while ago. The illusion of life's lies.

[SpokenWord]

These are the things that people forget the most in daily life especially trust which I often refer to as faith. They often say that believing is half the battle I now believe it is the battle. I love this first read of your work. Impressive.

[kyrie]

Stunning. We think that to trust no one but ourselves, to love no one but ourselves, to believe in no one but ourse;ves, is the key to survival. But in reality...it's very much the opposite. Very well done.

[Laura]

This is really cool, after every line the reader will want to read the next. I find that it is a piece that really hooks the reader. Another great one! :)

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

What an inspiring piece I really liked this poem loved the structure and pace and it conveys a strong message that your choosing to live life and they are living in an illusion well done keep them coming