Existence

There is haplessness..

and there is pain..

I wish I could be whole again..

I wish the scars on my soul would heal..

But the thought seems unreal..

 

There is agony..

And there is anguish..

A broken heart ..lots of tears..

And then there is life to endure..

 

I want out..

Wish all of this could end..

But it’s a constant continuum..

And my wishes will all go in vain..

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Read this twice and think of it as a roll of distant thunder, quiet yet specific .. i want to send it away, don't want to be part of it. Life's full of storms - and sunshine, we just can't control our 'lot' as much as we 'd like to but accepting that fact helps .. we do the best we can then, wake up of a morning still wishing

See how your words make the reader think, i've typed far too much. But, thank you for sharing, and PLEASE, don't ever want out of life, it's a magical place if you look in the right places..

[windtalker1252]

“And my wishes will all go in vain”
The wishes will not go in vain
Will find your knight in shining armour
Who will take away all the pain

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Powerful!

There are phases in life that makes us feel : I WANT OUT , I know because I am going through one , and so I can relate to this quite well , nicely written .

[Sydney Evans]

You can hear your sadness. Really nicely written.