The Spectator..

I am greatness..

and I am glory..

I am there in every victory..

I'm also in every wreath that grieves..

I'm in every breath that lives..

I run in the holy stream..

I am the morning balm..

I am the spring's calm..

I see..

I feel..

I'm there..

I'm a silent spectator..

Author's Note

i wrote this one long back and it may not be like the other ones..but pls leave honest reviews.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I got the feeling that this poem was speaking of war. If so, I thought the way you personified it was very effecive. I especially liked the rhythem and rhyme of lines seven and eight.

This is a very insightful glimpse into human behavior, and I tink you have rendered it in the correct light.

[Siddhartha]

A wonderful piece of work this... clichéd it may sound but this again reinforces my argument that divinity lies in brevity...

[Robin]

there is great thought underlying the lines of this poem , I like it .

[Rossen]

At first it smacks of me me me, but after reading it through twice I like
the voice of victory and glory to be embodied like this.
I find it to be more then interesting. I soon will read more by you.

Ah once again the sweet ringing of rhythm and rhyme in my ears . Have you read the poem "Do not stand at my grave and weep" , by Mary Ellis Frye , this is so like that one , please do read that one , it is one of my favorites , I am sure you will like it .
As for thins poem , I like it .