You and Me

sometimes ties between two people are so strong that distance and space cease to matter..and even when they are not around,they are with you every moment..

We share dreams,notions and visions..

An eternity of candid emotions..

Its an unseen bond that holds us together..

Its austere beauty making us believe in now and forever..

And even if I'm not there in your life..

I will be with you every moment and manifest as your conscience..

Our bond would thrive and grow in the distant world we created together..

Building on..

Stronger than ever..

 7th 

Mar 19, 2011

• Short Stuff
• You and Me

Author's Note

this is not the kind of stuff i normally write..so please be honest with your reviews..happy reading!

Reviews

[Keoni]

just who? is this he and she? have you heard of a band called she and he? you might want to look into it.....im a musician and lyrics are really a dime a dozen, but well drafted poetry is hard to come by......could you be a little more specific about this, names and places can so easily be revieled yet also kept secret.....hearing me? k

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love the strongness of your words in this poem, alot of people can relate to!

[Rossen]

this free style work reads well, you bring a clear sound, do more

[Art Sun]

niice work...a true thought of how relationships are beyond being close together...nicely written poem...

[Akshat♥]

this is very different from your other writes..
i really liked this piece..
good concept in this poem of a good bond..
nicely written:)

[Murtuza]

Well written. Bonds are everything to us. Some are strong and some are even stronger. But only the most powerful bonds stand the test of time and space. Good job!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is one many can feel. Long distance relationships.. and yet there is a bond.
Words you chose for this are perfect.
"Its austere beauty making us believe in now and forever.."
this is a very lovely line. I feel as Craig does, bonds can grow throughout space and time.
And honestly, I like it.

Chloe

[An owl on the moon]

I connected to this so strongly... can relate to this notion of distance, yet intimacy... that closeness you can still carry across the miles... How I loved the courage and hope of your words.. they give me hope as well that bonds can grow stronger... no matter space and time.

[LadyNaida]

This is as honest as you can get about your feelings and emotions. I love it! It's very spontaneous, sweet and straight to the point.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

i loved this!! i can relate to it :) you are a very talented writer. keep writing :)

[Jessica Alvarez]

loved it :)