Turmoil

           turmoil

     shattered dreams

  love,hatred,confusion

fighting,losing,lost cause

            jinxed

Author's Note

trying my hand at writing a cinquain..inspired by the group-'I Challenge You' :)

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I know this, like the back of my hand. Lovely.

[cartera]

Good to have a go at styles that you do not normally use, but remember that the secret is just to write. Just write.
Do not let style overcome content. Ever.
You have done it well, but we all know that you are a clever writer.
ATB
alex.

[K.C. Zbryk]

You captured most of my life in a few short lines. Amazing choice of words and great use of the format. Brilliant work

[LadyNaida]

Chaos in one saying. That how life is sometimes.

[SINDE]

Nice. You really outdid yourself. Packing your ideas in these few lines isn't that easy .

[Clockwork]

I think you used the form well. Your poem gives a subject describes it well, and finally makes a conclusion about the entire episode. Nice shot at the cinquain.

[Ruth]

OOOOHHHH NICE!
Superb love! All encompassing and consuming, I LOVE this!
xx

[Linear]

Cinquain eh.....no wonder I have not tried it, to be able to adjust your writing style to addapt to this constraint and still be able to get your thoughts across is to me quite marvelous, so for that i applaud you :O)

[emmajoy]

You really work at writing and I truly admire that! You've described the feeling so clearly in spite of the containment of the style. Bravo.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good try..!!!!